A New Collection Analysis: Interwoven Stories of Trauma
Twelve-year-old Freya stays with her distracted mother in Cornwall when she encounters teenage twins. "Nothing better than being aware of a secret," they tell her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the weeks that follow, they will rape her, then entomb her breathing, blend of anxiety and frustration flitting across their faces as they eventually release her from her makeshift coffin.
This might have stood as the disturbing focal point of a novel, but it's merely a single of multiple terrible events in The Elements, which gathers four novellas – issued distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate previous suffering and try to achieve peace in the present moment.
Disputed Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's release has been overshadowed by the presence of Earth, the second novella, on the preliminary list for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other nominees withdrew in objection at the author's controversial views – and this year's prize has now been cancelled.
Discussion of LGBTQ+ matters is absent from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of major issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the effect of mainstream and online outlets, family disregard and abuse are all explored.
Multiple Narratives of Trauma
- In Water, a mourning woman named Willow relocates to a secluded Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for terrible crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a athlete on trial as an accessory to rape.
- In Fire, the mature Freya manages retaliation with her work as a surgeon.
- In Air, a parent journeys to a memorial service with his young son, and ponders how much to divulge about his family's history.
Pain is layered with trauma as hurt survivors seem fated to bump into each other again and again for all time
Related Accounts
Links proliferate. We initially encounter Evan as a boy trying to flee the island of Water. His trial's jury contains the Freya who returns in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, partners with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Secondary characters from one narrative resurface in houses, taverns or legal settings in another.
These narrative elements may sound tangled, but the author is skilled at how to power a narrative – his prior acclaimed Holocaust drama has sold millions, and he has been rendered into many languages. His direct prose sparkles with thriller-ish hooks: "in the end, a doctor in the burns unit should be wiser than to play with fire"; "the first thing I do when I reach the island is modify my name".
Character Portrayal and Narrative Power
Characters are portrayed in succinct, impactful lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes echo with sad power or perceptive humour: a boy is hit by his father after urinating at a football match; a prejudiced island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade jabs over cups of weak tea.
The author's talent of transporting you completely into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an earlier story a real excitement, for the initial several times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times nearly comic: pain is piled on pain, coincidence on coincidence in a grim farce in which wounded survivors seem doomed to encounter each other again and again for forever.
Conceptual Depth and Concluding Assessment
If this sounds not exactly life and closer to uncertainty, that is part of the author's message. These wounded people are weighed down by the crimes they have experienced, stuck in routines of thought and behavior that stir and spiral and may in turn hurt others. The author has talked about the impact of his personal experiences of mistreatment and he portrays with understanding the way his characters traverse this risky landscape, extending for remedies – seclusion, cold ocean swims, resolution or refreshing honesty – that might let light in.
The book's "basic" framing isn't particularly informative, while the brisk pace means the exploration of gender dynamics or online networks is mainly superficial. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a entirely engaging, survivor-centered epic: a valued rebuttal to the typical fixation on investigators and offenders. The author shows how pain can affect lives and generations, and how years and tenderness can silence its aftereffects.